an honest opinion...

[mabymc]

hi everyone!
I'm writing this post today because I'd like to show you a music video I shot and edited for a friend of mine.
I am not a professional videomaker and this is not a job but just a passion.
I just want to ask you your opinion about the video, what I did wrong and how i could do better.
I hope you will enjoy it and also I hope not to waste your time with this post.
Here's the video:

Thank you very much!!!

 

[Bram Hengeveld]

Looks very good imo. But I miss the eye catching female singer in the video

 

[Tom]

No offence but it's looking every other hip hop video to me. Doesn't mean it's bad just that it's something that's well known by now.